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IMDB rating: 8.40 Plot: This is the story of a named Penelope, who is the victim of a curse placed on a wealthy family by a witch. After generations ago, a witch placed a curse on the Wilhern family that would result in the next girl being born into the clan having the face of a pig. The otherwise-normal girl Penelope is forced to endure life with a pig’s snout instead of a conventional nose, which has sent many a potential suitor running off into the streets, shouting in terror. Eventually, she runs away from her sheltered existence and overprotective parents, to explore the world on her own. As she meets new friends and a potential lover who doesn’t run away, she begins to discover happiness – while all the while her parents believe the only way she can be happy is through an arranged marriage, which will hopefully break her curse. |
Actors: McAvoy James,Dinklage Peter,Grant Richard E.,Woods Simon,Thornton Jason,Brand Russell,Davey Martin Nigel,Feast Michael,Fosh Christopher,Frost Nick,Gorman Burn,Comedy,Drama,Fantasy,
Can you please read my story…what do you think?
Please read this part first, or this won’t make sense. Sorry, it’s really long, but could you please read at least some of it and tell me what you think? I’m going to edit out some of the too long descriptions as in "he said BLANKily, as he BLANK BLANK", like someone said. I did it a bit, I’ll do it later.
Please could you give only constructive criticism, I’m 14 years old. If you could say the good parts too so I don’t change them?
In the first post (the other question) I copied and pasted wrong, so ignore the start, and go to additional details.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=Av3wjLsaldFScM_NvK9ZPhjty6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20091227024612AAEzgLl
The rest so far…
In the distance they could see Anne starting the engine of her 4WD, steering into another street and out of their sight.